托福机经:2014年4月12日托福写作真题与范文(二)

2022-06-09 17:19:58

  综合写作:
 

Topic议题
Primary care doctors
美国的初级医护人员
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Thesis总论点 Primary care doctors show a tendency of decline.
美国的初级医护人员在减少
No
Sub-point 1
分论点1
High tuition fees
医护人员的学费很高。
Financial aid like scholarship helps them pay the loan.
有经济辅助,如奖学金,帮助医护人员偿还贷款。
Sub-point2
分论点2
Little chance for internship
医护人员没有实习机会。
It may be true for some hospitals, but for other types, they actually provide more opportunities. There will be as many as 1000 vacancies if young doctors could move after three years.
有些医院机会少,但有些医院机会多。三年后迁移然后会有更多的机会。
Sub-point3
分论点3
They are under a huge amount of pressure.
医护人员压力很大。
Government will help ease their pressure and provide more vacations.
政府可以出台法令给医护人员减压而且提供更多的休息。

  独立写作:

  Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers. 重复2011.04.15NA

  Sample Answer:

  In this age of rapid technological development, in order to be the most advanced and successful, universities must keep their facilities and resources up to date. This not only attracts more students, but also attracts renowned professors to the university.

  Students now more than ever are demanding that universities provide the very latest in academics. To receive the most advanced education, advanced facilities are required. A student majoring in science cannot obtain an accredited level of experience if his university does not have the proper laboratory facilities. Likewise, a liberal arts student is equally as dependent on a current library. Progress is the main purpose of institutions of higher education. A university that does not seek to improve its facilities will fail in improving its students.

  A university that does not invest in its facilities will not only fail to produce good students, but will also fail to attract famous professors. Universities are able to attract professors because they can offer them good facilities with state-of-the-art technology so that these professors can conduct successful research and remain at the top of their respective fields. For example, a famous biology professor would think it a waste of time to teach at a university that does not at least have an electron microscope. With the proper facilities, universities can easily attract the best teachers in the world.

  There may be some university facilities, like gymnasiums, that on the outside do not have any direct connection to the success of the university’s academics. However athletics is great way to draw attention to a university. When universities get attention, they also get funding. Private donors are the main way that universities can afford to upgrade their facilities. Therefore, the more attention a university gives to its facilities, the more potential donors it will attract. This is why so many universities in American lay such great importance on their sports teams and their sports facilities.

  Universities should make updating their facilities a top priority. Having world-renown professors is important for the success and prestige of a university; however without advanced facilities, a university will not be able to attract these professors. Without advanced facilities a university will also not be able to attract many good students or even donors to help further improve the university.

 
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