2018年3月24日托福写作真题回忆及解析(附名师范文)

2022-05-18 03:44:27

  

        本文是小编为大家整理关于2018年3月24日

  本期真题及点评名师:俞淼淼老师


  整体点评

  写作难度适中,比较常规。综合写作旧题重现,曾在2016.4.23的托福考试中出现。专有名词较少,学生可以比较容易理解。独立写作此题也为旧题重现,曾在2014.7.6的托福考试中出现。题目简单,例子也比较好举。

  综合写作

  话题分类:生命科学

  考题回忆:总论点阅读总论点:bird feeder do harms to birds

  听力总论点:disagrees and holds the idea that bird feeder has positive effects on birds

  阅读部分

  1. bird feeder导致大量鸟聚在一起,加速疾病传播,例子是house finch的eye disease

  2. 会加剧由predator effect和逃脱predator的过程中撞到窗户导致的死亡

  3. 会人为延迟migration time导致它们被杀或者熬不过harsh environment

  此题为旧题重现,曾在2016.4.23的托福考试中出现。

  听力部分

  1. 听力反驳:natural factors更重要,而且对于house finch来说,他们大批量高频率迁徙,加速了疾病在个体与群体间的传播

  2. 听力反驳:bird feeder可以提供更多nutrition,这些营养可以让鸟长得更健康更强壮,同时提高reproduction rate,因此幼鸟补充了大量成鸟死亡的空缺,鸟类的数量不减反增

  3. 听力反驳:sunlight是更重要的导致迁徙的原因,食物只占了很小一部分原因,鸟延迟迁徙往往是因为其他原因。

  解题思路:综合写作按照要求进行观点的对比以及听力细节性内容的阐述

  参考范文:The writer and the speaker have a debate on feeding bird during the winter. The reading’s statement is that it has negative influences on birds, which is opposed by the following lecture.……

  独立写作

  话题分类:日常生活

  考题回忆:People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are very different from what they do at work.

  此题为旧题重现,曾在2014.7.6的托福考试中出现。

  解题思路:典型的生活类话题,ETS常考类型。对于观点选择,可以做出明确的选择,也可以中立。明确选择某观点的基础上,篇幅结构可以为一边倒,也可以转折让步使文章结构更加严密中立观点的基础上就要两个选择都进行讨论

  参考范文:Nowadays, whether people should relax with diverse interests unrelated to what they do at work is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. Two different opinions obviously exist to support and to oppose. Personally, I agree with the idea that relaxing with different hobbies unrelated to work is beneficial……


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